I am from Country

    Poem ELNG 205   April 12, 2008

                                                                    

                                                       I am from farm machinery

And ice cream sandwiches

From Grandma Darcia’s deepfreeze.

 

I am from sunsets and push lawnmowers,

Baby kitties and abandoned bird nests.

From hard work,

And “if you want a car, get a job!”

 

I am from campfires, and Ukrainian traditions,

From tools clanging in the garage,

From coyote howls, and mud puddles.

 

I am from pretend and straw bales,

Video cameras, and ideas,

From books, cattails, wood slivers,

Old hats from the basement,

And from the sound of gravel crunching beneath my feet.

 

I’m from the creek that runs

From one end of the universe to the other,

Cold cereal, and gooseberries

(“Why do you like those things anyway; they’re sour!”)

And from, “No, Lindsay, I don’t want to hear the poem you just wrote.”

 

I’m from quad and snowmobile,

Tomboy and pellet guns,

Shiney rocks, and being forced to wear this stupid blouse,

And ugly green birthstone.

 

I am from watermelon and burning barrels,

Being excited to go to Yorkton,

From toy tractors, and moats in wet sand,

From having my own room,

And you get your first fishing rod what your five.

 

I’m from trying cigarettes on the playground,

Wind, trees, and yellow school buses,

From exploring old buildings and hockey games,

And “I’ll give you two bits to hill potatoes.”

 

I’m from earthworms, tadpoles, salamanders,

Games of Hide’N’Seek at midnight,

From making forts and being the leader,

And being smart; sweetheart; and trying my best.

 

I am from learning to express myself

Differently than everyone else,

From feelings, rainbows, memories

(The good and the bad),

From a place where imagination lives

And growing up happens.

That’s where I’m from.

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3 Responses to “I am from Country”

  1. Hey Lindsay! Great to see you still using your blog. Just a note, I think you need to change the colour of your text on this post- it’s not showing up, however I could read it on my Google Reader page.

    As far as the poem-writing goes, I really liked the little impressionistic moments that this piece gives, however, I would trim it back a little, personally, as I think that creating such a long peice detracted from some of the really beautiful moments in the poem. My favourite stanza was definately the one that started “I’m from quad and snomobile”, because it had a nice flow, the lines were very well balanced and the moments were like hints of little flashbacks.
    I personally would also tweak the last stanza a bit. You are trying to say too much in it, I think. You introduce bigger ideas that don’t seem to fit into a conclusion; they seem to want to spurr poems of their own.
    Thanks for sharing. Sorry for the extra-long comment, I hope you’re ok with my giving suggestions; it’s a lovely poem, and I just like helping people take their writing even further. Keep posting.

  2. Great stuff. Love it that you’re still blogging…tells me it was more than just a class.

  3. Pirogue says : I absolutely agree with this !

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